August limps past the Ferris wheel, a cotton candy wisp stuck to her cheek. She stops, licks her dusty lips with a snow cone-blue tongue while deciding how to spend her sister Summer’s last dollar bill… <<read more>>
~ Microfiction Spotlight: November 9th through 15th, 2011, Microstory A Week
WordLoft by Natalie McNabb 
Excellent writing! I like the presentation format as well.
That is something a writer always hopes to hear. Thanks, David.